WALT: Write a detailed narrative in 3rd person
A hot day at the beach
It was hot day at Steven house. So Steven had an idea that Steven and his family could go to the beach. Steven went to ask his mum. “ Mum can we go to the beach? “ asked Steven. His mum said “ ,Sure we can go to the beach but don’t forget to get your towel and your clothes”.
Steven and his mum entered the car. Their car has white shiny rims with shiny windows. Then his mum started the car and went off. Finally ,they arrived at the beach. With fresh air passing through their hair they felt relaxed. Steven was excited to swim in the sea but first his mum needed to find a spot where they can sit under the tree for some shade. Dad went to get some ice cream from the ice cream truck. Steven’s dad came back from the ice cream truck.
He gave out the ice cream to the family. But then Steven’s little brother made a
mess so his father knelt down to wipe his face. After that Steven can go for a swim with his father. Steven felt very happy to enjoy his day at the beach.
by Liam
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